String Quintet in F#m

Good Evening everyone

I’m starting a new project for string quintet and wanted to make a thread here to document the process, post updates, and hopefully get feedback as the piece develops.

Right now, the work is planned in three parts. The first section will be an Andante. I want it to begin with a gentle, lilting 6/8 character — soft and flowing, but with an undercurrent of drama beneath it. From there, it will gradually transitions into something much more chordal and chorale-like, with a warm, hymnal texture that I’ve been wanting to explore for a while (hymnal style in 6/4 timing - with a melody that is more free-flowing in terms of rhythm). I would love to modulate to Db major here and restate part of the hymn theme, but we shall see.

The second section will move into an *Allegro*, with a more energetic and animated character to contrast the openness and lyricism of the opening.

At the moment, what I mainly have written out is the melodic material that will shape a good portion of the Andante. I already have a pretty strong sense of the harmonic language I want — rich, lush string writing with a soft overall atmosphere, while still keeping the fullness and warmth that I love writing into chamber textures.

I’ll be posting sketches, revisions, and progress updates here as I continue working, and I’d really appreciate any thoughts or feedback along the way. Looking forward to sharing more soon.

String Quintet in F#m.pdf

Morning @BlackkBeethoven

I have looked at your wip, and I have attached the file to help you.

StringQuintetinFm_pdf.pdf

6 hours ago, Kvothe said:

Morning @BlackkBeethoven

I have looked at your wip, and I have attached the file to help you.

Thank you -- I'm working on writing a string quintet so I won't be doing solo piano piece 👍🏾

Yes. I am aware. Baby steps: you have to crawl first. A solo piece will help you to learn so much.

3 hours ago, Kvothe said:

Yes. I am aware. Baby steps: you have to crawl first. A solo piece will help you to learn so much.

How would a solo piece help me more then writing for strings?

@BlackkBeethoven:

That is great question! Before Bach wrote chamber music, he first went through and reharmonized chorales, wrote solo piano works, and then solo works for strings. In fact, his cello sonata is so well crafted!

You have to learn to the basics first: counterpoint, harmony, and musical form. Then apply that! :)

Well, I'll go ahead and scrap this piece then since I have so much to learn

6 minutes ago, BlackkBeethoven said:

Well, I'll go ahead and scrap this piece then since I have so much to learn

@BlackkBeethoven please don't quit writing your piece! Young Composer's Forum should always strive to be a great place for you to receive feedback, guidance and support on any of your musical projects. "Go write a piano piece because you're not ready and need to learn the basics" is not really constructive feedback. Members on YCF should strive to support the composer with whatever project they choose to write, not tell them what to do. We're here to support you in whatever YOU choose to do not what WE think you should do.

17 minutes ago, BlackkBeethoven said:

Well, I'll go ahead and scrap this piece then since I have so much to learn

Well, just take writing this as a learning opportunity! No one writes good pieces before they write tons of bad ones. I remember how bad I was when I wrote my first dozen of "pieces" (of shxt).

I myself do follow the path of writing a piano solo work, then chamber work, then in the present continuous tense orchestral work, but not everyone needs to follow this route since everyone's learning path is different. I would say @Kvothe 's feedback is a personal one that you may follow or not, but never use it as a reason to forfeit any pieces!

Henry

1 hour ago, PeterthePapercomPoser said:

@BlackkBeethoven please don't quit writing your piece! Young Composer's Forum should always strive to be a great place for you to receive feedback, guidance and support on any of your musical projects. "Go write a piano piece because you're not ready and need to learn the basics" is not really constructive feedback. Members on YCF should strive to support the composer with whatever project they choose to write, not tell them what to do. We're here to support you in whatever YOU choose to do not what WE think you should do.

I understand that, but if it's that bad, I don't want to waste more energy on it 😬

11 minutes ago, BlackkBeethoven said:

I understand that, but if it's that bad, I don't want to waste more energy on it 😬

You will never know whether your piece will be bad until you work on it! Most of my pieces grow themselves and I never know in advance how their outcome would be! To me writing is more an adventure and excavation of yourself which you will find numerous unexpected routes to take! So take it easy and enjoy the view you have when writing and treat it as excursion, rather than wasting energy!

Henry