Feminine Fragments, original piano collection

Hello, second post on this forum. I would like to share with you my new piano collection called Feminine Fragments. Any feedback and suggestion is well accepted. For the score on video visit my YT page on the link below, aswell if you're curious about my other composition. Thank you!
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Feminine Fragments.pdf

Hi @Filippo Noti ,

Long work you've done there! The sheer length must have put off some listeners ;-). It's extremely diverse, moving from one style to another. Some movements I liked (e.g.: parts 4 and 5), others less. In general, I found too many repetitions. Here is some detailed feedback (don't know if you were looking for some, but I think that's the idea of the forum in general, so here goes):

Part 1:

In general, very chill music, very relaxing. I felt as though I was in an art museum.

Some more precise feedback you might find useful (based on my personal impressions of course):

* I felt the introductory material, that leads to the more interesting mm. 11-13, was a tad too long (I typically found mm. 3, 7, 9 superfluous)

* In m. 17, my brain was expecting for a change in the first notes of the melody, sth different from the usual G, C, E

* in mm. 21-47

* this too, I felt, was a little too repetitive

* funny writing though, I guess the eighth notes must be played with the left hand?

* mm. 49-56, the idea to reuse the main theme is a good one, with richer chords. Some of them could probably be improved, e.g.: in m. 49, I liked the first 2 chords, but not so much the 3rd one - maybe a G7? Same for the next measures where you repeat the 2nd chord.

* the very last chord, I found out of character, not in the "mood" of your composition (probably a bit too "brutal")

Part 2:

* mm. 60-68: soft, mellow part (a little too mellow to my taste), with some interesting rythmic textures

* m. 69-71: quite a surprising change, I liked that part, especially the arrival of the 3rd voice, well done! I would encourage you to build on that!

Part 3: not a great fan overall, I felt it lacked of some passion: it felt a bit like an exercise

Part 4: really a funny part!

* I liked the little variations in the accompaniement (e.g.: m. 102, 105,

* m. 125: I liked the transition

* interesting chords in the treble in mm. 131-142

* mm. 143-150, I found quite repetitive and aggressive

* brilliant end in mm. 167-169

Part 5: a nice fugue, very baroque, I liked it!

Part 6:

* what a contrast, we're moving from baroque to Satie-like music!

* Although I liked the atmosphere, I found most chords too dissonent (maybe this was the intention). Some were very nice though, e.g.: 202, 204, 207

* I liked the use of the 3rd voice

Part 7: the idea is good, sounds like a very good basis for a song, I would have developped the idea a little more (didn't really see the point of m. 249)

Thanks for sharing, and looking forward to hearing more of your compositions!

Take care,

Julien