6 hours ago6 hr this is my untitled piece for pianoits one of my proudest works, i would appreciate any feedback and suggestions for titles :Didk what to say, ive been working on it for a few months on and off...probably finished? maybe ill change some voicings and harmonies idk.dissonant greie.mp3 dissonant greie.pdf Edited 5 hours ago5 hr by karlmarx forgot pdf
4 hours ago4 hr Hello,It's nice. I had this image of a robot colony on mars, working hard with the two moons and the ethereal beauty of space. You got this really spacey-feel going on, but also this sense of busy-ness. It feels beautiful in an out of world sort of way. There are moments of emotion, but for the most part it feels almost kind of coldish with the type of harmonies you are throwing it. Hence...robots in space!Parts of it don't even sound like piano, I kept thinking that perhaps a guitar (around 2:00) was playing in the background. But of course, this is probably supposed to be a keyboard piece.
46 minutes ago46 min Very cool! I like the electric piano, it's a nice change from what I usually hear around here. I agree with Grant, it has a space type of feel, probably because of the timbre, and the jaunty syncopated melody worked really nicely over the flowing eighths in the left hand.
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