untitled piece for piano

this is my untitled piece for piano

its one of my proudest works, i would appreciate any feedback and suggestions for titles :D

idk what to say, ive been working on it for a few months on and off...

probably finished? maybe ill change some voicings and harmonies idk.

dissonant greie.pdf

Edited 21 hours ago21 hr by karlmarx
forgot pdf

Hello,

It's nice. I had this image of a robot colony on mars, working hard with the two moons and the ethereal beauty of space. You got this really spacey-feel going on, but also this sense of busy-ness. It feels beautiful in an out of world sort of way. There are moments of emotion, but for the most part it feels almost kind of coldish with the type of harmonies you are throwing it. Hence...robots in space!

Parts of it don't even sound like piano, I kept thinking that perhaps a guitar (around 2:00) was playing in the background. But of course, this is probably supposed to be a keyboard piece.

Very cool! I like the electric piano, it's a nice change from what I usually hear around here. I agree with Grant, it has a space type of feel, probably because of the timbre, and the jaunty syncopated melody worked really nicely over the flowing eighths in the left hand.

thanks for the praise guys! for me this piece isnt really about space or anything like that, but more about me lamenting the loss of my inner child.

12 hours ago, Grant Weep said:

Parts of it don't even sound like piano, I kept thinking that perhaps a guitar (around 2:00) was playing in the background. But of course, this is probably supposed to be a keyboard piece.

about the synth, its just me whos tired of listening to piano soundfonts as playback, also i feel like the colour of this piece fits with the serum preset.

Though i may change the sound later on when i publish this on musescore, this soundfont has a too long sustain and it gets muddy with all of the legato.

Hello @karlmarx!

I think this would be nice if you played on a Wurlie or something like that. This piece maintains the atmosphere and because of dynamic development, sounds enjoyable.

Serum's preset is nice, but have you ever tried Fracture Sounds' plugins? They're totally free and you can probably find a great tone to play this piece on an electronic keyboard.

If you use an electronic piano for this piece, the title name can be A Piece for Wurlitzer - kind of like that.

Anyway, thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it! Hope you have a wonderful time on YC!

Best,

Lithl.

4 hours ago, Lithl said:

Hello @karlmarx!

I think this would be nice if you played on a Wurlie or something like that. This piece maintains the atmosphere and because of dynamic development, sounds enjoyable.

Serum's preset is nice, but have you ever tried Fracture Sounds' plugins? They're totally free and you can probably find a great tone to play this piece on an electronic keyboard.

If you use an electronic piano for this piece, the title name can be A Piece for Wurlitzer - kind of like that.

Anyway, thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it! Hope you have a wonderful time on YC!

Best,

Lithl.

Thanks for the praise! I havent heard of fracture sounds, but ill check their vsts later. Ill think about the title some more but i like the idea of wurlitzer pieces… maybe a keyboard or synthesizer quartet is due to be written.