A Story about a hooker

There are no words as it is a midi, but it has a voice part none the less

no name II.mid

0oo this is pretty cool! love the verse (00:34 onwards?) sounds a bit like something The Hush Sound might do in that part. Chorus is nice and memorable.

I think there's a slight mistake round the end of the verse (1:08 onwards) the synth voice in the back is playing some notes which don't seem to fit too well. Maybe with actual vocals it'll sound better tho. The first note you hear in that part definately doesn't sound right tho, maybe bring that note up a semi-tone, sounds a bit better (just a suggestion :whistling:)

The solo's cool (thought note values seem a little muddled after the trill at 1:44) and I like how the piece doesn't lose any of it's momentum, good song!

Any chance of seeing the lyrics?

Sam

There was something about this song - perhaps it was the harmony which made it sound happy and melancholic at the same time, or it was the upbeat drums part with the backing singers, or perhaps it was just this lovely cabbage I am eating as I review this piece... in any case it was a pleasant listen. I liked those dissonant stabbing chords you had every now and again!

I would like to meet this prostitute if she is a snail,

*slimey signature*

Blenching Snail

Bring out that backround melody. I had a hard time hearing it.

I liked it though. Good Job.

Question do you play this stuff in a band or something?

no i dont have a band, so it never leaves the drawing board so to speak