January 1, 200719 yr title-29-94 Work in progress. Woops, this should be in writer's block I guess. I was going to delete this but I dont see the option so Ill just wait for this to be moved. sorry.
January 1, 200719 yr very nice piece. But, I am conflicted, what did you intend to have this be as in a structural point of view? I could help with your work in progress.. but unless I know what is going on musically in what you want to do with the piece i can't. So far, it looks like a ABA', and maybe a terneryor rondo could be made out of it..
January 1, 200719 yr Author Thanks for listening! I'm still quite a novice at composition, and when I begin writing pieces, I ususally don't think things through and plan ahead, I just write. I think I'm shooting for ABA, but I should probably lengthen that middle section... I see what you mean by the rondo, but with the ideas I have in mind I think ABA would be more fitting. I began writing this piece as a challenge to myself to create more memorable melodies. My tutor said my other pieces are orchestrated well and all, but they lack any memorable or consistent melody. An example: Arabesco
