Aria for soprano and orchestra, transcribed for piano

An approximately 120 bar long aria for orchestra, transcribed for piano.

I am a Danish composer, 18 years old, and the text (below) is written by the German poet Friedrich Schiller. Anyone not skilled in the German language can write to me, and I will make a translation.

However; any comments?

Greetings from la Testarossa

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Das Geheimnis

Er konnte mir kein W

Arie2.mid

No comments at all?

the range on that soprano seems a little on the high side.

it would help to see the score rather than just a MIDI file.

there are moments where the harmony and melody are at odds with each other, I don't know if that is wanted, however to my ear it's a bit too much of a clash.

it's a very very charming piece, a delight to listen to! keep up the good job!

it's a very very charming piece, a delight to listen to! keep up the good job!

Thank you very much!

#Qccowboy:

The range fits, but i wrote it one octave above to make it work on a picollo flute.