"Maldexterity"

"This composition is based on a work by somebody on this site, no insult intended, can anyone guess the name & Author of the original work?:laugh:

Maldexterity.mid

Gah, this.... is odd, I don't really see what the point is

"This composition is based on a work by somebody on this site, no insult intended, can anyone guess the name & Author of the original work?:laugh:

Why put quotes around your own statements? I think this composition genius. Please slow down once and a while.

"This composition is based on a work by somebody on this site, no insult intended, can anyone guess the name & Author of the original work?:laugh:

I have no idea whose piece it was.

These pieces are like someone on cocaine. Way to hyper and chaotic.

"The Real Composer Is Apollo XI, song Called "Anxiety", It just seemed to me a little more spice was needed to complete an already chaotic motif."

much thanks! you obviously appreciate new horizons, very rare.

For chaos, it may be nice to experiment with tempo and such. Especially if there are a few tonal moments thrown in there. That would really shock the listener.

I used a MIDI to score conversion program and took a look of the score. Have you looked into rhythmic variation on the left hand paino part? It's mostly 16th notes in the score. Also, you may consider other variation techniques like modulating into different keys, adding an occasional pause. It would also add to the chaos if more rhythmic variation was used.

For complements, I still like some of the harmonies used, but had to take the piece at half-tempo to notice them. It may be good to keep in mind that other perceive music a bit faster than the composer when they first hear it. At half tempo this piece has much more tonality then first perceived.

I do think that this is an improvement over your previous posts. It's a different approach to composition which I would like to see as it develops.

I WILL TAKE YOUR ADVISE & IMPROVISE!