Operation Musical Layers

I wrote this piece to no particular movie so, don't bother asking me what's going on on screen. :D

I would like to hear your thoughts on it though...I wrote originaly with the idea of soldiers in a somewhat random, yet as is in war, not so civil, day...If that helps at all... :P

Anyway, tear it apart, or give some encouragment and justified criticism, but please don't pain me by not taking a few seconds to comment on what took me hours to create...:)

I hope that look was pitiful enough...:)

Audio Xanga

Hmm, I guess one could call this a lesson in never begging...

Since the only comment is from myself...:whistling:

I like the intro (0:01) - captures a sense of anxiety and tension - and the transition into your first theme. I really like the theme played by the oboe (?) (0:22), and how you layer on harmonies with other woodwind instruments (0:42).

I was a little puzzled when you dropped all instruments, and softly brought in the snare drum (4:22). When I first listened to that section, I thought the song had just finished, only to realize there was still more.

Overall I enjoyed listening to your piece. Keep up the good work!

I like the intro (0:01) - captures a sense of anxiety and tension - and the transition into your first theme. I really like the theme played by the oboe (?) (0:22), and how you layer on harmonies with other woodwind instruments (0:42).

I was a little puzzled when you dropped all instruments, and softly brought in the snare drum (4:22). When I first listened to that section, I thought the song had just finished, only to realize there was still more.

Overall I enjoyed listening to your piece. Keep up the good work!

Thanks for commenting starky, I wasn't sure how the snare drum thing would go over, though I thought it was a cool effect at the time...This piece mostly features the oboe and horn for the main melodys...Just so you know. :glare: