A cartoony videogame piece

Rather than just commenting on everyone else's pieces, I thought I'd upload my coursework for this year. What do you all think of it?

It's really three bits mashed together - at various points, my hero, Dagenham Dave, gets a powerup, goes driving, and fights an evil French supervillain. How do you like it?

It's finished and sent off now, by the way, so I'm probably not going to change it too drastically - I'd still be interested to hear your thoughts though :(

http://www.b3ta.cr3ation.co.uk/data/mp3/5b8398f9be6e866a89c2a2c93b52ffd0_dagenhamdavegoestofrance.mp3

Hey, I really enjoyed this piece(s) as it went on, the opening piano could have been arranged a little better as some of the chords were a little growly but I really enjoyed the three different sections. The French supervillan was amazing! You definitely nailed the sound, in my opinion anyway.

I thought the percussion was also pretty well done. Obviously it's very cliche but it suits the brief.

Good Work!

I'm on a beach! Nicely done.

Nice choice of instruments for the French sound (accordion and clarinet!)

The videogame style is perfect... Nothing is boring, the piece hold together and there are great contrasts.

Very nice.

Good key changes in this, and I can hear a lot of influence from Mario type games in there. It's always good when you can imagination the situation from a piece of music, and yours does exactly that. This is fine, I don't think anything needs changing.