Frozen Forest

This is my first post in this site.

I dont know if the name suites it but the Air conditioner was set too high

so my room was nearly freezing so i came up with the name!

I started working on this track keeping in mind to make something like a guitar

and a flute song (like in Wild Arms 3) but i forgot myself and carried away so

it turned to something else!

anyway hope you like it.

song duration: 1:43

size: 2 MB

Time to finish: 3 hours

Tool used: FL-Studio

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Mmh, we have to register if we want to listen to your piece...

Please find another way to share it :P

ooops sorry! that was the first time i use that site i didnt know

Here's another links:

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thank you songjun i'll keep your comments in mind when updating the song

i'll try to replace the simulated guitar part with a real one.

I like the mix, that's the first thing I notice. It's very stereo and very bright and it sounds great (for a rookie). The instruments all have characteristic sounds and are cool. You've pulled off the frozen thing well. It is, however, repetetive and thinly instrumentated like someone previously said.

My suggestions...

The bass is okay, just be careful of dissonances with the other rhythm instruments. It can be louder and fatter too, nobody likes a scrawny bass. Acoustic bass might sound nice with this, or possibly a better synth. I also feel like this is missing some sustained strings or a warm pad. Consider percussion too; it doesn't have to ruin the feel of a frozen forest, even something as simple as shakers and a triangle (a favorite combination of mine :P ) can help move things along and give it life and stability. Unless you want everything to sound characteristically dead since it's a frozen forest, in which case that's okay, but even then I would probably put something modest in as the piece progresses and take it back out during some parts. Jingle bells and windchimes would work great for this theme! Also, keep the rhythm under the melody volume-wise or at least out of its way as far as panning is concerned. Of course you don't have to follow all or any of these suggestions; they're just what I would have done.

I look forward to hearing an update, I think this has potential.