Luz

Hi, this is a song i composed some time ago my main idea was to create some diferent atmospheres

the name Luz means light in spanish

the original idea was to be a song with lyrics but ended having none, so is till bow just instrumental, i never managed to record it with aproper band, and now i am thinking what to do with the song, is use a standard instrumentation, try to add just some percusion and another guitar or what. also lyrics yes or no?

La choza de mcniac

Luz - very nice. It seems just a bit slow in places and also a bit thin in places. But very enjoyable. Possibly add a second guitar playing some rhythmic accompaniment adding a bass line would be good. Or a few lyrics.

Chocolates - also good.

These pieces could be the guitar lead of a jazz trio which would have some light percussion (say hit hat and wire brush) plus an (electric) bass.

thanxs forthe comments, i'll have em in mind, the originalidea forboth songs was to be played among a band, in fact luz had a jazz trio arrangement (guitar , bazz,drums), but i have never been very happy with it . also madesomekind of acoustic version witha two voices arrangement that never worked for good. sorry i cannot show those arrangement of the song, but i didn't recorded em when i had the band.

i could never add anything to chocolates, i really like that song, but is stacked there since more than a year

Cheers

Esteban

It's like Carlos Santana's pieces. Very nice :P

Chocolate is fine but you can add other instruments like drums, I think sax will be good for it what do you think? :)

thanxs for the comments, and yes i think i heard santana one or two times (a few more indeed) , and just love it.

the idea of a sax part for chocolates have been suggested before by someone else, i think it may be a good idea, i never tryed tocompose a sax part so i am not sure whatkind of stuff i can write or not. i'll try soon and let you know, also if anyone has some idea that can be used there let me know :huh: