Rhapsody in F minor, Op. 4 (Please Comment!)

Here is my latest piece, my Rhapsody in F minor, op. 4. I hope you enjoy it!

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I liked this piece. The beginning is very fine. I didn't think the ending was as strong as the rest. It did seem to be separate ideas stuck together with different moods (which is what you intended I assume) but possibly too many ideas in one piece to be totally satisfying to the listener. I would have liked a repeat (perhaps with a variation) of the delicate opening theme.

You might have noticed that I wrote in a fugue style at one point. Directly after that style, I refered back to the begining mood, yet with variants.

I am gone for a year, and all I can see are these new storage websites. I hate them. lol. they drive me crazyyy!!! But ... notice I take the time to go to them and then download the piece.

Hmm. I spent the whole time trying to grasp it. I think that if you filled it out a little more. It seems very bare. And unplanned. Like someone just opened finale and clicked random notes. I liked thed direction that you were heading, but it really needs some thematic material. And what was that little burst of classical mock-up in the middle? LOL. Anyways, this piece has potential, but it needs alot of work. Try using some chords.

Oh. And I missed the fugue. How is it possible to write in "fugue-style" without actually writing a fugue?