Easy piano minature - "Fly"

Hi... decided to give it a separate thread to get a better chance for some feedback.

Was digging through some stuff and found that small piano piece I wrote when I was 9 ... actually first serious piece I've ever written. It was only in my head and I finally wrote it down some 2 years ago. The piece is called "Mucha" (means - Fly) ... I wonder what you think about it :) ? You can also listen to a mp3 version made with some piano sample here: My compositions

Enjoy!

Misiu

mucha.MUS

WOW I really really like this piece. Its energy is just amazing. Wow I cant tell you how much i love this piece; I am actually goin to go play it on the piano right now. The only thing I would change is the ending

here is a different one

wow.MUS

Hi trackrocks14!

Thanks a lot for your comment and your enthusiasm towards my piece, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I also liked the ending you propose :-) Perhaps I should start a competition for an alternative ending for "Mucha" ... :D

Cheers,

Misiu ;)