Flying (A major)

I made this song for contest at muusikoiden.net (finnish). Theme was flying. I got third price. :happy:

String & percussion ensemble [Violin(s) I & II, viola(s), violoncello(s) + timpani (A, B, E)]

NOTE: It's whole MIDI-sound.

http://koti.mbnet.fi/sakvaka/Flying_sakvaka.mp3

Flying.pdf

flying.nwc

Oh, I forgot to say "Comments would be nice". :o

This might be just because of it being NWC but it sounds very broken. None of the notes slide together. It makes the piece not sound like flying (unless it was a bee jumping around in the air) but more like an old robot walking jerkily across the floor. I am not very Familar with NWC but can you add Bow markings to smoothen it out?

the strings are in tremolo when they are playing arco. thats why it sounds disconnected.