Air Theme/Ending Theme?

I wrote this one the other day. I wanted to write an Air/Sky theme, and I personally thought it worked well as one, but one of my friends also suggested that it sounds good as an Ending theme, so I'm throwing that up in the air as well. I decided to turn it into something other than boring piano, so I hope you like the instrumentation.

I also haven't bothered to make dynamics because right now I'm having way to much fun just getting things to come out. I've barely written anything in two years and suddenly, within two weeks, I've come up with seven (so far). I'll give them to you one by one though as not to daunt you or anything.

Enjoy, and comments are very appreciated! =D

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Kewl.

Kewl.

I think what he means is: "This piece was a nice and enjoyable composition. Although it was lacking in construction/direction in some areas, it serves its purpose well - creating an easy listening Sky/Ending piece that will certainly be appreciated in most any game. I enjoyed it" - but then maybe thats just me [literally?]

i thought it was very good!!!

although i think it could have a little longer ending

Yeah I liked this one alot. It seems to work for a sky level pretty well. Keep up the good work.

Thanks thanks for the comments!!

I also posted this on vgmusic and they had members comment that it wasn't grandious enough to be an Air Theme. I thought it sounded fine alone, but then again, when I was writing it, I was rushing to get it out, so I went back to it, and now I updated it with some light percussion which might make it sound a little better, who knows?

thanks for listening =)

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