Enchanted Dream

I haven't done anything here in a while, so here's one of my experimental pieces. I basically used all of the tinkly, metallic sounds included with Finale '06 and threw them all into a short little tune.

If someone could make a midi of this, that'd be great; for some reason, whenver I tried, the timpani came out as chimes. Not a good substitution.

Comments? Suggestions?

~Kal

_Eurojazzer posted a midi version a few posts down if you don't have Finale....

Enchanted Dream.MUS

It was very predictable, but quite easy to listen to. I enjoyed it.

I gotta go...someone's after me

I enjoyed it. The melody was very obvious, and the key changes kept the same idea fresh. The background noises fulfilled the desired effects, and it was very easy to listen to. I'm not sure if the ending is your intended ending, or if it will lead to something else. If it is the intended ending, even if a suspended ending is what you were going for, it didn't work for me. You did say it was experimental though, so it does have potential. Here's the midi file you requested of it as well. Good job.

Enchanted Dream.MID

I liked it, but the ending sounded so sudden. Is it finished?

I liked it, but the ending sounded so sudden. Is it finished?

Yes...and no. It wasn't the original ending, but the song's been sitting there for about a year now, so i decided to see what you guys had to say about it.....

~Kal

It's really nice, I like it a lot. The ending is quite abupt though, I think you need to do something about that.

I feel that the piece could easily run for twice it's current duration or longer without even adding any new material just by looping back on a few sets of measures in various differnet ways. It's very easy to listen to, but needs a softer landing at the end.

It's really nice, I like it a lot. The ending is quite abupt though, I think you need to do something about that.

I feel that the piece could easily run for twice it's current duration or longer without even adding any new material just by looping back on a few sets of measures in various differnet ways. It's very easy to listen to, but needs a softer landing at the end.

Yeah....I've been trying to think of something to stick in there after that. I'll find something, and when I do I'll post it up here.

I gotta go...someone's after me

:laugh:

~Kal

"Just 'cuz you're paranoid doesn't mean people aren't out to get you..."

kinda liked it

Oh no...!!!!! here they come again!!!!

See 'em? There, behind the tree. No, now they're hiding in the bushes. Oh woe is me. Quick, I'll hide behind that cloud. Ha ha They can't see me. Oh no, they have thru the cloud sight googles on, What to do?

It's okay for now. They went behind the sun. Or did they? Are they comiiiiiiinnn.....

"Just 'cuz you're paranoid doesn't mean people aren't out to get you..."

kinda liked it

Oh no...!!!!! here they come again!!!!

See 'em? There, behind the tree. No, now they're hiding in the bushes. Oh woe is me. Quick, I'll hide behind that cloud. Ha ha They can't see me. Oh no, they have thru the cloud sight googles on, What to do?

It's okay for now. They went behind the sun. Or did they? Are they comiiiiiiinnn.....

Yeah....Are you seeing a psychiatrist?

Still working on an ending....gimme a couple o' days....

~Kal

Very nice and predictable. I liked it but the ending is just really sudden.