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You have some very rich chords in the beginning! I feel that the rhythmic melody starting at m.27 fits a concert band setting better than orchestra. There were some really weird rhythmic things going on though. Using tuplets will make your life easier!

I like this! It certainly has an interesting feel to it. As much as I enjoyed it, I was disappointed with how short it was. I felt like you had a really great idea here that could have been expanded on. Either way, it was a delight to listen to.

Just by listening to the opening, I initially thought that it would be tranquil, relax-music-type throughout the piece. But it isn't I love how well-redeveloped the motive is, and the way you build up the emotions considering it is a short piece. It sounds like a couple who have been separated for a long time because of a war, but they don't have much time to share their experience as they have to leave each other again. So desperate but got relieved knowing the beloved half is still alive and safe.