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this is very good. i enjoyed it. what sound library do you use? Ss

Yes, this needs some sampled instruments... Great job w/ just MIDI! Ss

Hi Phil, I understand the instrument problem... if there "would be" a score - I'd score it a 3.2 out 5 stars. Not bad at all! Ss

Hi, Beautiful work! I would like to hear a more human touch to the music. Sounds a bit too mechanical... Add some dynamics and expression in the lines... Watch your low register... sounds a bit muddy at times. Hope this helps. :) Enjoyed! Ss

@szikoratibor I agree that you should expand your solos as stated. I am optimistic about the evolution of your genre. Your creativity and persistence to follow your voice inspires. Ss

As all have said before - this is very well written and strikes a deep emotional chord. But how long until, "imitation is the best form of flattery", is not enough? Ss

""But in [His] mind this is how it wanted to change and move"" Ss

i don't think it's strange at all. Very playable. The form is creative and more interesting than a standard "schooled-youngster" idea. Laughing can be a sign of insecurity. Ss

expecting "tartness", but smooth all the way down. Ss

I think I hear a little "Dark Knight" in there... AWESOME! Ss

This is rather very good! Love that marcato bass line... What sound library do you use? Awesome! Ss

I enjoyed it w/o the score! Find your own voice among the many Hollywood film composers and you'll have your niche into the business. Nice sound library too,,, Ss

Much potential and deserves expansion - however a good start. I would explore and vary the themes more... Enjoyed. Ss

Very well done and incredibly beautiful. What a great live performance and recording. You should be very proud! Ss

Very nice Mark! I do remember that YES song. Interesting arrangement. Ss