nickstu

Thanks for your comment Yes, maybe there's some harmonic problem at the beginning... I'll try some different solutions. They're there just because I didn't delete them :) I don't know, I did this just to try to write something I'm not familiar with, maybe if I get to refine the theme I could expand it...

I'm not at all an expert, so feel free to just ignore my comments :) I think that at measure 7 there's something strange. It should be like a crescendo but the melody slowing down to triplets kind of contradicts the crescendo. I think the development is really nice, and overall it sounds better than the first version.

A short piano piece. It is my first attempt at writing something in a romantic style. The rendition is done with a vst, I didn't play it.Any feedback is welcome, I'd really appreciate if you tell me what you think of it. Piano piece

EDIT:::: I re-posted this as a complete work

This seems cool, I'd like to join!

Here's my try at the Blaster Mater challenge. Any feedback welcome. Blaster Master (Level 1)