Rachael

Im sorry i don't like much about it. Here is the things that will make it better. Well...i believe that the lyrics you've written took barely any time to write, please do correct me if i am wrong. So suppose you take more time writing the lyrics. The vocals are too loud for the music in the back, you can barely hear the music in the back. So suppose you make the vocals quieter. Im unaware if these are your vocals or not, but i am sorry to say that your vocals are not good. Your vocals hit some good notes and made some good melody, but only in certain parts. Suppose getting a vocal teacher or someone to help you out with your singing? There is always room for improvement. Please do not take my post to be harmful, this post was meant to help and was completly my opnions, you may either take them or leave them, it is your choice. Have a nice day. ;)

rather repetative is some parts, but i like it. Well done. ;) (permission to put on my ipod?)

ok thanks i'll have a try at it

For now this piece is called excitment, i may change the name later. Anyhow this piece is short and i also might expand on it later, but here is my piece i hope that you enjoy it. Excitment: listen online

Wow i really like it! This is my favorite of yours! :huh: And i'll agree with Marius, excelent game music, but i'm not sure how it'd go too good in a concert setting.

really short, but i like it. I think you should add onto it and make it a full song. :)

wow thats really good. Good job! :D

this is really pretty, it sounds like something that might intro a movie, or just be the music to a part in a movie, or like one of those fantasia musical cartoon things! (if u kno what im talking about!:D ) I love this piece, very nice job!

sounds a bit like something you'd hear in a final fantasy game. I love it! Nicely done! :shifty:

i like it, i want to hear more. I think you should add to it. Good job. :)