mpaul27

I emailed you, I really liked your music examples. We'll talk more on msn :)

Yeah, I'll change it in my first post, thanks.

The position has been filled.

I didn't know you can study for things like harmony. But anyway, Soundclick isn't working at the moment, so I can't upload the "newer version" yet. Maybe next week. Michel

Okay, I have an hour to fix some stuff now, maybe I'll be able to let you guys hear another version of this song later this day.

Thanks for the feedback! :) I'll start working on what you said tomorrow, to see how it turns out...

Ok, so this is my first finished composition, and I must say, there are some parts I'm quite happy with. But there are so many parts that just don't sound right, which I, with my limited experience, can't fix. Ok, so you can access from here: SoundClick MP3: Michel Paulissen - Band page with free MP3 music downloads on SoundClick It took me about 5 or 6 hours total to compose. I must say I sort of rushed through it, but that's what I do when I get frustrated. The song is inspired by nothing actually, I just had this tune in my head (which I have a lot) which I couldn't get out, until yesterday. I'm hoping for some (much) constructive critism. Michel