Bjarke

Hello every one hope you are doing well. i am working on a composition which are inspired i supposed cinematic soundtracks, late romantism and anime. How well do i have control over the drama? Does the piece collapse under it self at some point? (cohesiveness) What about phrasing or melody? is it clear? Personal critique: it seems to change drama in the second half of the piece which may or may not be for the better. The tempo may be too fast? The climax is very sudden(second half of the piece) There may need a better transition. If the mood changes in the second half it should at least have the same drama. Anyway. Looking forward for your critique and comments ! 🙂 Thanks in advance.

I couldn't sleep tonight so i made this. As usual any feedback is welcome. Thanks for listening.

A speed composition i made. Any feedback is welcome. Thanks.(made in a few hours)

My first electronic track. Any feedback is welcome. Thanks for listening.

Hello dear people. I have composed a new compostion and i would appreciate it very much if I could get some critique on the composition, anything you notice is vaild and some points I would like critique on it this: The cohesiveness of the piece, how well the piece creates tension for example, if it feels like the piece have "bumps" where it feel like it goes off. How well I exsecute the harmonic progressions and cinematic feel. The composition is influenced by Thomas Bergersen whom I listen to a lot these days. Like pretty much on a daily basis. Thanks so much in advance

Hello everyone. Hope's everyone is doing well. I finally have a new composition after working on it for a while. Feel free to critique anything you notice. Thanks in advance. flight dorico.pdf

I figured instead of posting them seperately which might make too many posts (spam) I thought it may be best to post them in one topic. Here is my lates compositions from the last 24 hours. '

Here is an other attempt at composing for piano and viola. I think it took me 2-3 hours to compose roughly. Any feedaback as always is highly welcomed and appriciated. Thanks.

Thanks everyone for your feedbacks and compliments! @PeterthePapercomPoser Actually regarding the picture it might be but i can't comfirm as it was really just some random picture which i found on a website i can download image for free xD This speed composition i believe took less than 3 hours i believe maybe around 2 hours? I usually do my speed composition in a few hours but if they are longer than 2 minutes it usually require more days. Thanks all again! 🙂

Hope its okay i share a youtube link. I thought it turned out pretty good. Any feedback is highly apreciated as always. Thanks.

Composed this in a few hours. Attempt at trailer music style. Any feedback is much appreciated. Thanks.

Thank you as well @PeterthePapercomPoser 🙂

Thank you so much @Henry 🙂

Hello all. Here is a short composition for Piano and Viola as the title says. This composition is made for two muscian students at my music school i go to which will be performed later this year I think. Title is still in progress. Any feedback is highly appreciated. Thank you. Best regards. Bjarke.

Wow Adamich It's really awesome to see you on the forum I didn't knew you where here too. just to clearify I am focusmrbjarke from youtube and as you know I been following your amazing compositions for some years. It's really amazing to see you here and I hope we can see more of your here if that is what you want 🙂 Welcome back to the forum! All the best. Bjarke.