Hi!!
Thank you for taking the time to review my waltz! I appreciate the feedback.
As for the purpose of this assignment: I think this way we learn about melodic embellishment and development. Because we have to do a sonata (practice of form and development), a waltz, and a Brahms (practice of counterpoint and romantic harmonies)
As for the bars you mentioned: those bars have a dissonant countermelody or fioraturas, so I thought that adding the seventh was maybe too much, but I shall consider it!
Thank you!