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Thanks everybody for the feedback! I'm sorry i took so long to get back to you. Cup noodle: Thanks! Unfortunately i really can't make more of a melody to my piece, i tried but it always turns out weird. :( Saxophone: The melody is originally like that, the melody the flute plays after the introduction is the main melody.

Hehe, this was very fun to listen to. I play french horn myself, and it would be fun to play this. :-) I think the piece might be nicer if it simply ended on that minor chord at the end, instead of the major one, with the little motif on french horn.

I enjoyed it, it was very good. I'd love to be the pianist playing at this. Although, it's a little bit too homophonic for me. The instruments are playing at the same rhythms, and it gets a bit boring in that sense.

For my GCSE i have to compose pieces, which is quite fun, although i'm not very good at it. :blush: This is my first composition, so be really mean with your comments, i wrote it at my piano, but this is the computer sequenced version. Done on FL studio: Click here. :-) I don't have a name for it yet, so i've simply been calling it one. ---------------- I've been arranging the piece for a small ensemble of: Picollo 2 Flutes French Horn Violin Cello Drum kit Timpani Piano I have no intention on changing the instruments because when i'm finished the arrangment we are going to record the composition live. :-) Here's the arrangement, so you can listen to it: Click here It's still a work in progress so parts of it sound empty, and i haven't composed the ending yet (it's really annoying having to jump from my piano to my computer constantly!) So be mean, and tell me what you hate, and what you hate even more. :D