Thanks Daniel for the advice. After listening to it with fresh ears today I do agree that there could be a little less rubato at times :).
I also thought about when the main theme returns about modulating through a few different keys and returning home closer to the end. What are your thoughts on that?
Also even though the song sounds like it is in the same key 90% of the time it is actually about 50\50 between the two main keys of the piece and at times it modulates for short amounts of time, Maybe there is a way I can stress though modulations a little stronger. Any tips on how I could do that?
Thanks,
Landon