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ok i understand now, my ears were just confused by the flute

hey i love the piece especially the bridge "and now i look around..." the melody stands out and filled me with emotions could you tell me the range for the singer because that's my only problem--whether the singer will be able to sing it i actually cant imagine this piece as either a film score or end title song in a movie because it's so beautiful, too bad we didn't hear this in forrest gump

Haha, I can sight read the tenor part :)

I really liked how you used the trumpets for the fanfare theme It does get repetitive with the bass notes, perhaps a little variation will brighten things up the intro reminded me of "dirty little secret" then the trumpet came in and it Reminds me of Spirited Away - Procession of the Spirits starting at 1:02 :YouTube - Spirited Away - Procession of the Spirits Spirited away has one of my favorite soundtrack now I am saying that because i think if you develop this song even more (themes, variations) then it can be as successful as spirited away Anyway i wonder why people dont comment on this, they haven't commented on my song either so i decided to show others some respect before I can get mine

I agree completely, and here's my reason 1) where do you think this music will be played? Unsure 2) How many people can write music like this? I know I can 3) Is there a part of the music that defines you?Sso when people hear it they go "it's Sebastian!!" 4) Would audience listen to this more than 3 times? I can't. sorry

There's just something about this music that i cant grasp, and i really like it I see busy streets and stuff and some people playing in a bar I am not familiar with Jazz but this song is worth listening

yea ill try my bet to attend, may need a reminder

i live in carlsbad!!!! go to lcc!!! k too much info haha

It's been ages since I came here; I've been composing on and off. So here it goes: zssong.mp3 - Box.net Thank you for your time:D

as a singer i enjoyed singing to the score very much I have little to say, but it would take a singer with great breath control bravo

another thing i have is some of my songs turn out to sound like other people's work, should i keep that song since i came up with it or should i abandon it?

Thanks man. maybe that's exactly what I need!

Dude I am downloading this to my ipod. I agree that you can make this song better by giving it an intro. Other than that I can't really pick out any "flaws"

Whoa I think that's exactly what i have right now. Can you please please explain it? I have 2 years until college and i have to start writing big pieces

like piano pieces, clissical ish... Sorry i did not make it too clear. Thanks for pointing out

Guys what are your inspirations when writing music? A year ago, I feel like i lost inspiration writing songs and it affected me at school and other places. Now when i write a song they don't sound the same as before, and I can't expand the themes. I'm not asking for a therapy :) but just how do you write songs and what makes you want to write songs and what keeps you going. Thank you

watch sum japanese films like last samurai but thats not really japanese. OO spirited away is really good

do you listen to this kind of music for fun? maybe i just have to get used to it or maybe ill play it

i heard it on youtube and i was like "what?" but it does have a boring summer's day feeling

it sounds really good perhaps a translation would be good? i wish i can hear the choral version someday

wait isnt this piece like made up of random notes? looks like it to me im sorry can you please help me how to listen to 20th century music?

i am blown away

hey verdi_lver thank you for your pieces, the melodies you have are very cute and catchy may i ask you where did you go for music college?

Thank you guys so much for the feedback I was starting to get worred if my song is horribe because no one left any feedback for a while. THANKS as for right now I am still expanding this piece, I had to end there because that's what i had so far, and i didn't want to give u a unfinished feeling if i ended on a V or something Soon the song would be finished and ill be playing it myself and i will upload it

i would love to hear ur piece but it says "Not Found The requested URL /impulse_9/002.mp3 was not found on this server."