Canon and Fugue for two keyboards, in F Major

I officially suck.

Although I kinda like the canon, the fugue came out scrafty.

And yes, I know, C major is WAY far from B major, but I made the weird transition anyway...

It was supposed to be for two harps, but the sounds reverberate too much in finale, I don't know if it'd be the same in real life.

Here's the mp3.

Kill me.

I love that kind of music, really ceremonial :)

It might sound a bit, but harmonically it is quite a mess.

hi Berlioz! very nice! i just think you could expand it. it seems that the fine material you have exposed and the powerful beginning of the fugue fall into nothing with that sudden end. i can figure a great structure just waiting for showing up.

Yeah, I might rewrite it.

The canon is good, as said before, very cremonial.

I think you could have made the transition between the canon and the fugue a bit clearer, maybe a cadence or some repeated notes.

The exposition is... chaotic, it might just be the midi, but it might need work(the subject is not bad though, nice and jolly)

I like the dissonant chord that doesn't resolve, but I would not repeat it in staccato, but it's ok.

I like your ending very much, nice build-up to the end!

good..very nice..good job

I think you could have made the transition between the canon and the fugue a bit clearer, maybe a cadence or some repeated notes.

Probably, yes.

The exposition is... chaotic,

YOU DON'T SAY?? :P

Yeah, scrafty modulations...

I like the dissonant chord that doesn't resolve, but I would not repeat it in staccato, but it's ok.

My pianistic urges are hard to overcome. :P

I like your ending very much, nice build-up to the end!

Simple actually, parallel thirds all the way. :musicwhistle: