November 18, 200718 yr Hi. Pretty ambitious I thought. I liked the use of triplets to begin with, but then all of a sudden you stopped using them after the introduction, which seemed a bit abrupt maybe. I like how you brought back the triplets later on (and how you used them vs semiquavers in the right hand, although that passage looks kind of difficult to play). There seems to be a fairly strong theme running through the piece, but I don't think midi brings out the dynamics properly (it would probably sound better with some p and some ff sections). Also, your midi file loaded for me with the left hand as the first staff, which was kind of confusing.
November 19, 200718 yr I like this, I like those emphatic points with the block chords (is that what they're called?) :whistling:
November 20, 200718 yr ok.. interesting and pretty , the support of the left hand is good also was it not to maintain it equal in the work, that way I am avoided monotony
November 21, 200718 yr Very enjoyable with good movement. I thought more could have been done with the charming theme in the first 8 bars before going to the next section - possibly stay with this style for another 8 or even 16 bars - say modulate to another key and then back before going on with what you have in bar 9 on. I found the section m53 to m77 okay but not as interesting and imaginative as what came before. Perhaps inserting a contrasting part in the middle of this would help. Well done. :thumbsup:
