My composition

It is about autumn...contains a Bach-sounding end.

Comments are welcome! (Be constructive, :happy: )

dimancheautomne.mid

:thumbsup: Comments please! :(

Hi there,

nice little tune, but I have some constructive comments ... it's a bit monotonous, you could try to make some variations in the accompaniment and not let the instruments play exactly the same rythm, e.g. in the begining ... later that harp comes out of nowhere, and it all looses a bit integrity. You seem to have quite many instruments in that piece, but it doesn't show through the music ... I don't think you're using them very efficiently. You could also think about introducing some more harmonical variations in the accompaniment, that could make it a bit more interesting ... right now it's a bit flat. The ending ... is quite sudden, doesn't really end like Bach ... perhaps something's wrong in the file?

Keep on working,

Cheers,

Misiu

I'll try to vary accompaniments in future works, thanks!

P.s.: What i meant by the Bach's finale isn't the really end, but the 16ths serie at strings, it remembers me a Bach's composition which I can't find the name...