March 31, 200818 yr I need comments on this piece (Heaven) and I need them FAST!!!:excl: Here you can find a link to the mp3 SoundClick artist: yyoppp - page with MP3 music downloads and the PDF is attached Please Comment as fast as possible, I need to mail this in at FOUR PM TODAY:excl: Finale 2008a - [heaven.pdf
March 31, 200818 yr sorry I'm late on this, but a few things: div? in how many? how? your divisi sections are confused and confusing. the voices go from 1 to 2 to 4, but with no indication of which desks are to be playing which parts. and hate to break it to ya, but cellos don't read in alto clef. also, bass in pizz? just write "pizz" at the first notes of the bass part. the little "pizz throughout" indication is... umm... cheesy. cutting it awful close, no? posting today for something that is due today? what if there had been major problems with the score? would you have had time to fix them? would it have mattered?
March 31, 200818 yr Author sorry I'm late on this, but a few things: div? in how many? how? your divisi sections are confused and confusing. the voices go from 1 to 2 to 4, but with no indication of which desks are to be playing which parts.and hate to break it to ya, but cellos don't read in alto clef. also, bass in pizz? just write "pizz" at the first notes of the bass part. the little "pizz throughout" indication is... umm... cheesy. cutting it awful close, no? posting today for something that is due today? what if there had been major problems with the score? would you have had time to fix them? would it have mattered? wow, I can not believe I actually put the cello's in alto clef. I must have been like way out of my mind or something.
March 31, 200818 yr wow, I can not believe I actually put the cello's in alto clef. I must have been like way out of my mind or something. Ahh I have those moments as well, I enjoyed listening to your piece, it really did sound beautiful, I liked the way you would resolve tension at areas..great job!!
