Vampire's Theme

Organ/Violin and Viola, earlier song so it's not THE GREATEST

Meloncholy_Melody.mid

Vampires_Theme.mid

umm the other one kind of slipped in there lol

Hmm...this is a nice piece, reminds me of some of your others.

You've got a nice way of using both instruments and melodically it's good except for some minor problems (note held WAY too long around 1:30). On to harmony, generally done well but it's hideous in certain portions such as a part around 1:45 and onwards which made me cringe. Work on that for your more recent pieces to avoid such things.

Thematically, it does a poor job of reminding me of vampires, even in our stereotypical sense. I'd know. It's nice though and the organ does give it a feel which is getting close, some revision could get it to work as intended.

That's all, keep working.

I expected that :D this was when i guess u could say an experimental writer, not really giving intese thought in the songs, but I am currently writing a song that is similar to this (kind of dark) so it should be better

I think it is suppose to make u cringe

This hardly made me cringe, but it has potential - I like the use of the organ, however I believe that overall it could use some polishing as well as variation. The rhythms are static throughout, and the mode that you employ doesn't even come close to reminding me of a vampire.

Otherwise, I enjoyed it - good work, cheers.