Feedback on My First Movie Score :)

Hey all! I really really would like to get some feedback on my piece. It is a movie score fo an intense sort of scene. It is my first pieces, so please tell me what you think! :)

www.envisageworks.com/unhackable/Rhapsody.WAV

Exactly what kind of scene did you have in mind for this piece? It would help to know to give a helpful comment.:)

Haha I dont know. It sounds like a slow motion type scene. Very dramatic. Or creadits. :)

I see this song as a prepping for a battle or something, thats all I pictured in it.

Though it was a little drawn out, it was nice sounding. This song sounded very familiar to a song from Transformers.

Overall I think it sounded nice, but now I'm gonan have to break from writing for a bit cause I have that string piece stuck in my head.:P

what programme do you use to write? i liked it

Thanks for your input guys! I actuall used Magix, and my keyboard. :)

Its great, nice building up the tension there, although the sample with the guy saying something gets annoying at the end.

Its great, nice building up the tension there, although the sample with the guy saying something gets annoying at the end.

I presume thats to stop people ripping it and using it.

I liked it - very nice quality (probably because I'm used to MIDI sounds). The percussion is well used. The only thing I would say is that it would need more variation to be included. Perhaps starting off with the theme and revisiting it later, with something totally different in the middle.

I think the strings from 0:09 could be called a theme and it does return towards the end. You could also say that 1:14 is a slightly differnet direction and provides for variation. But from then on it's basically the same thing building up until the end. That may need a bit of variation, perhaps you could introduce another theme. I wouldn't say it's intense, rather it feels like it's for a scene just before the climax of the film where the climax would be the most intense part. As someone else said above, it sounds more like a preparing-for-a-battle sorta thing. I liked it, if you were going for a Hollywood feel then you should be happy because you achieved that quite well.