metal/alternative

i wrote this song completely and played it on my guitar first

the little part where it pauses for a moment is where a taping prog is supposed to go cant figure out how to do that on guitar rpo though

enjoy!

the order is

Verse

Chorus

Verse

Solo

Outro

Elemental revenge.mid

ELemental Revenge.txt

If I had to give one recommendation it would be to bring the bass down one octave. I like the fact that you actually gave it an extension to it's role, but there's nothing to occupy the lower notes.

This has got a groovy, menacing feel, similar to some of Pantera's stuff, however I dare say you should try to reconsider the drum beat for measures 10, 14 and 15, it really doesn't seem to fit with either the guitar or the bass's rhythm.

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The song isn't bad. I personally think you could develop it more, and get the drums to match the guitar and base more. And I don't see where the lyrics fit in really. But the song is fun, and kind of dark. You should extend it more, and listen closely to your harmonies.

Keep at it. It's fun to hear music.