First classical piece: Nubian dreams repirise

The last day

It seems to be in a very minimalist kind of style, which I like. But because it wasn't originally intended to be a concert piece, it seems very square and on the beat. Minimalism avoids monotony by the use of small changes, either in rhythm, melody, or harmony. I would have liked to hear the changes between chords taken a little slower, and I would have liked to hear more than 2 chords in the first place. If you intend it to be a concert piece, you can't just take what you had and then just call it by another name. You have to expand on it a little. It's a good start.

It seems to be in a very minimalist kind of style, which I like. But because it wasn't originally intended to be a concert piece, it seems very square and on the beat. Minimalism avoids monotony by the use of small changes, either in rhythm, melody, or harmony. I would have liked to hear the changes between chords taken a little slower, and I would have liked to hear more than 2 chords in the first place. If you intend it to be a concert piece, you can't just take what you had and then just call it by another name. You have to expand on it a little. It's a good start.

Thanks for the comments. I'll work on it.:)