Dark Metal Piece

Something I've been working on for past week. Haven't got around to finishing the lyrics yet. Not sure if the structure works.

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I'm not shure i can imagine what this song shuld reay sound so if you can write what instrument shuld sound like, for instance what kind of distorsion shuld be around 2.24 min of song and at 3.06? Sorry if im anoyng

metal lol tthsi is so far from metal

this isnt even power maybe symphonic black metal if it was faster but u need to make this not soujnd classica;l

i see alot of classical influence

if youw ant to make this metal destroy it with a metal hammer magazine

and what abnds you in to so i can have an idea of wabht your trying to do

Not that I'm an efficianado or anything....

...It might be because of the midi realization, this doesn't sound much like metal. It could with different instruments, but right now this sounds like Dark Knights Castle and not Dark Metal.

But not bad. Kinda monotonus at times, but not bad....

~Kal

its pretty good. but it's not metal. new age i would say.

Castelvania???

I personally though it was a bit monotonous and melodically devoid; definitely didn't need to be 5:40. But, Oh holy scraggy, the Organ/Xylophone/Handbells were a nice touch! :thumbsup: