August 5, 200817 yr hi ycer this is my incomplete work of violin sonata second movment i think that there are something wrong about this work . it sound like crap for me ( not CRAB !! I like crab !!) pls listen and give me some comments . so i can decided that i recompose again or correct or other sort of thing next thank you dark prioncess
August 7, 200817 yr All I can say is that if it's meant to be atonal it's probably pretty cool. If it's not meant to be atonal then it sucks. (ha ha) What else can I say? It's not my genre obvisously. Sorry I'm not much help. At least I took a listen. ;)
August 20, 200817 yr All I can say is that if it's meant to be atonal it's probably pretty cool. I really enjoyed it. I was not able to view the score. Would you mind posting it in PDF? If you do, I'll come back and look at that with the music and see if I can offer anymore advice. This however, is not my primary style, but I really want to help in any way I can.
August 23, 200817 yr It sounds like dance music for a dark occult ritual which is kinda cool, but i dont know to much about that kind of music so I wont offer and criticisms.
August 23, 200817 yr Not my genre either, but if it's meant to be atonal it's one of the better atonal works I've ever heard. Is it complete? The ending seems to be lacking and a bit abrupt.
August 23, 200817 yr I don't know anything about violins but I'll give this a shout ;] It sounds very interesting O__O I... don't reall yknow what more to say than that... IT has its own uniqueness. I also like the last 2 measures of it. I think that would sound espicially good if progressed more. From measures 60 to 62.
August 23, 200817 yr Even For A Tonal You Need To Keep The Parts In Complete Sentences, And The Repetion Gets Just A Little Annoying, But When I Write A Piece For Violin Or Something I Usually Click On Window Then Instrument List A Box Will Pop Up On Violin Change The GM To String Ensemble 1 gives you a better tone.
