Technical Death Metal - Fragility (All Society)

Hey guys,

long time no post.

Thought i'd drop by to put up some off my current, non-"concept album" works. This one is a meshuggah-esque (obviously not as good as them) type song, my first really forey into polyrhythmic writing.

Yes, its me singing, and i'll soon post a version which doesn't involve my voice... because i really don't like the sound of me.

Hope you enjoy, and would love any and all feedback.

Cheers,

NOTY

LYRICS:

Autonimous, static existance

defined by the self-regulated

controls, of a mechanical word.

The new-age politics based on face value, where the liberated hide from their freedom.

One world united, under common hatred,

one life divided, all society.

Desires quashed by the world controllers.

Manipulate mass produced cloning.

Conveyor belts = our lives

One world united, under common hatred,

one life divided, all society.

One world united, under common hatred,

one life divided, all society.

THIS OUR BRAVE NEW WORLD

LINK:

Download Robby Anderson Fragility Ringtone - Free Music Hosting - OTE5QE4ZSTMU

Yeh, its a pretty poor hosting site i know...

No way is that kick drum real...

the biggest thing was that the riff wasn't terribly engaging - even through the breakdown... Maybe its just the Tech Death Metal isn't my strong suit at all, but I have heard Meshuggah...

What's polyrythmic about it?