August 24, 200817 yr I started an orchestral piece called the voyage and I need critique on it. thevoyage.mid
August 24, 200817 yr Hey, I thought it conveyed a voyage quite well. It is very hard for anybody on this forum to critique a piece without a score, could you please post the original one? One thing I would do is try to make it longer. Here is some sheet music, it might not be right, but it's what finale came up with when it opened the midi file. Anyway, I took the midi file and turned it into an mp3 file, I think it sounds a little better. Here: 4shared.com - online file sharing and storage - download thevoyage.mp3 EDIT: I didn't know this was in incomplete works. I simply followeed the link, but sorry about the making it longer comment voyage.MUS
August 29, 200817 yr I like the main theme here. As jon said, why not try making it a wee bit longer. I can imagine it sounding awesome if it is expanded on and goes more in depth into the "voyage"".