Etude for Arpeggios

This is an Etude for arpeggios, i need your comments to improve myself :)

Etude la Arpeggios.mid

I am sorry if i am too harsh about your composition.I would prefer this to be played by classical guitar,you may try as a duet.This is my suggestion,you may contact me for further details.

Lol, the begining reminds me Granados' Oriental... (plus an horrible arp

it sounds pretty, but it gets boring. or maybe it's just me.

Do you mean this to be an etude in the style of Hanon? It seems like a series of relatively unconnected exercises in technique. If that is what you intended, with the thought of making it more interesting than simple repeated arpeggios, then you succeeded I think. However, I also think you could retain the good exercise aspect and make it a bit more interesting by adding a second line of counterpoint and holding off on the sustain pedal in most places. There is a good part about 3 minutes into it to the end that is much better than the first 3 minutes.

Pretty nice. I like the minor section two-thirds through, the the music preceding it could use some more personality. I like how the very ending is constructed; gives it a nice climactic closure.

- Matt

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