I am Hell Recording No Lyrics (5 STARS BELIEVE ME)

This is my newest song there will be some interuptions(my brothers were making water balloons)

Please rate it 1-10

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5/10

Can use a lot of improvement, Maybe add variation to it.

Well......

I hate to be a dick, but I thought this was terrible. Judging by your voice I assume you're 13, so I have to give you some credit there. Nice job for your age I guess but other then that I thought your music was kinda boring. In fact, I was more interested in hearing what the people were saying in the background.

On a lighter note, I think you have a good start, but for a solo guitar piece I think you need to take advantage of chords, and the fact that the guitar can sustain notes. Even adding a simple ringing bass line would improve this tremendously. Decent start, but now you need some direction.

2/10

This isn't terrible riffing, but you have to speed it up like it's on coke. The style is very open to a very fast interpretation -- a slower interpretation would make the rhythmic figures seem staid.

As it is, work on a counter melody.

If you want to keep it the speed and timbre it is -- listen to some of James Blood Ulmer's solo blues albums - Birthright's a great start - and check out the more "out there" pieces, like High Yellow, for weird little licks. Marc Ribot's got some killer Beatles covers that have similar ideas.

Pretty good for your age. I cant play guitar then or even now. So yeah great job! Dont stop playing you get better every time you play!