Need critique on a piece I wrote.

Don't know what I was really thinking with this one. If anything, it's just a practice piece. But yeah, if I had to describe it, I'd say it's kind of Halloween like by kind of rock like at the same time. And please, if you view the topic, you might as well critique the piece rather than be one of those people who looks at topics and says nothing.

Here's the piece...

SoundClick artist: Mike 2008 - page with MP3 music downloads

I liked it, it wasn't like deathly grim, but the kind of music you might find on a cartoon Halloween.

I like the lead ins, and that bas (if I can remember correctly).

The end seemed a bit, unending. I think you finished on the V chord ?

Maybe make the ending more, hmm, accented/final/endy.

nice piece overall, catchy, I still have the tune in my head :)

will

Meh. There was no form, just seemingly a keyboard demo of all the different voices.

The drum accents were pretty cool -- sounds like you know a bit about drums.

It was cute though.

pretty neat music, why not make a decent sized piece out of it?

I found it very cute. The piece, I agree, did seem slightly unfinished. For Halloween, I think it's a great piece because all the little kids won't be scared, since the music is entertaining for them.

I found it very cute. The piece, I agree, did seem slightly unfinished. For Halloween, I think it's a great piece because all the little kids won't be scared, since the music is entertaining for them.