Atonal Invention for Piano

Here's an invention for piano I wrote. I've written four others but this one is by far the best and most developed. See if you can identify the motiff! If you want to see the others let me know... Here it is for Finale so you can listen, and I'll put it in a PDF too.

Invention No. 5.MUS

Finale 2008 - [Invention No. 5.pdf

FYI, MIDI is often a better file format than MUS, since it's not as proprietary. ::breaks out the Finale Notepad...::

I actually liked all but a few spots in this piece. The theme is well put, but I think it might be overstated in the same register. Maybe hiding it in a chord in the left hand would be more effective.

You might want to check out my Miniatures post in the piano forum. /plug