February 16, 200917 yr I made these tonight. I have no musical training but i would like feedback so that I can become better. Your guidance is greatly appreciated! starflake.mus starflake.pdf
February 16, 200917 yr I would urge first to EXPAND YOUR IDEAS!!! They are nice, but the development of them is sort of sparse. There is a mellow feel to it; I like that. Certainly not my style, but (as I said in the shoutbox) you seem to have a lot of promise in music. Nice job :) Edgar
February 22, 200917 yr The poor samples you used gave this little justice, but from a strictly compositional standpoint, I see promise in what you could do with piece with a little more time and some more realistic samples. Plus watch your quick volume slider jumps - there were a few noticeable jumps in mix volume near the end of the piece, but not the kind from the samples or your MIDI velocity.
