Ring of Saturn

Hello all

This is one of my electronic compositions I did last year. Not very complicated. Smooth ambient piece, plenty of background pads.

Rings of Saturn

Hi all

Btw. I would be grateful for any comments on my tracks :)

Thanks

Like the atmospheres you created here.

The strong element of the drums against the delicate woodwinds is very nice.

Have you considered developing it further?

I like this piece however

I feel that it really doesn't seem like you are utilizing the use of being electronic. Almost all the instruments I hear are instruments that you could just find acoustically. In fact I think it would sound even better if done acoustically instead.

But that's just me

actually not. I did not think to develope it further. Honestly i just wanted to try my new synth, and after it was done I though it is a nice tune ;)

Thanks for comment plutocat, however what is your definition of being electronic. For me electronic composition can be anything that cannot be recreated (performed) with an acoustic or electro-acoustic instrument.

Almost all the instruments I hear are instruments that you could just find acoustically

In this case nearly all the electronic music can be acoustically.

You can play a real drum kit instead of 909 drum loop, you can play string ensemble instead of ambient pad .... and I can give thousands examples more.

That's not the way it goes i think

If you play a classical piece for piano using harsh moog patch with various effects applied will you still classify it as a classical piece?

Regards

Amazing. This is so good, that I thought you minght be Jeremy Soule for a second!

Ha, but anyway, I really liked it, and I'm not joking about the Jeremy Soule comment...

Thanks for comment plutocat, however what is your definition of being electronic. For me electronic composition can be anything that cannot be recreated (performed) with an acoustic or electro-acoustic instrument.

In this case nearly all the electronic music can be acoustically.

You can play a real drum kit instead of 909 drum loop, you can play string ensemble instead of ambient pad .... and I can give thousands examples more.

That's not the way it goes i think

If you play a classical piece for piano using harsh moog patch with various effects applied will you still classify it as a classical piece?

Regards

What he is saying is that it sounds too much like a harp and a string ensemble.. then a flute.. your synth sounds sound too much like real instruments..

Really, it sounds nice.. but I think i have to agree with him.

Btw. I would be grateful for any comments on my tracks :)

Yes I see no very much activity in this section of YC, I hope the new reviewers may change that.

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About the piece in question I thing is very good, very much for meditation.

The name is "Rings of Saturn" or "Gardens of cirodi".

The file I heard (gardens_of_cirodil.mp3) is suddenly cutted at 2:01, is that ok ?