Instrumental Pop music....

Hellllllllloooooo, I am SebastiYOW! and I have decided to use the power of this website to answer my question...

Which song is my best song?

I have 12 songs, so I know most people wont want to listen to every single one, but I think you only need to listen to a few seconds of each of them.

Here's the link

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ThAnK YOU!

Anybody going to answer?:ermm::iffy:

I'm not a big fan of this kind of music, but of all of them I liked No Way. In my opinion, it seems like it had the most flavor of them.

Okay...now I just need a good 10 more or so. 1-No Way, and 0-the rest.

Anybody else going to answer?!?

Of them all, I like "The Power". I think one big thing you should work on is getting your loops exactly synced up. With most of the pieces, and I listened to each one for at least 30-45 seconds, it sounded like the loops that you had made to be constant throughout the whole song weren't quite perfect. I know, it's difficult work, but when you're gonna have something loop from tart to finish, over 3 minutes, it needs to be flawless. I was hearing lots of hiccups and slight jumps of the beat, all of which just made me want to skip to the next song, cause I'd cringe. You have good work, it needs polishing to make it even better.

Well, I only have one song, which is Bullets, that might match what you are talking about, but the rest are fine and don't have problems with the "Loops".

I liked Classy and Clearer. IMO, some of your songs start off good but then you completely change up the beat (like Fine Prints) and the song kind of gets killed and makes me want to switch the song. Some consistency would be good instead of all the jumpiness.

I like pop music I enjoy listening to Don't fall down..

Brad S. -- if you listened to whole song, you woul hear that the jumpy part was only there for a few seconds and then it went back to normal.

Anyway, everythings kind of split now, so I haven't gained any insight on which my best song is.

more reviews please!

I'm sorry, I have listened to many pieces but I didn't like none of them. It's all confused, full of loops, repetitions and predictable parts, I can't follow any melody. It seems like everything is improvised and mechanic.

Sometimes you start with a good idea but then the song takes an other direction.

Sound quality, mistakes and loop syncing do not help.

My advice is to listen to more music and work more on any single measure of your composition, until it will be "perfect" and write the piece after you have a clear idea of what to do.

You could also write shorter pieces and fill in with many ideas, they would be far more interesting.

Last advice: try to listen your pieces as an external listener, you will hear the truth. Sorry again, but keep trying. ;)

Well, I guess I have to say thank you for your critiscism, even though I agree with only have half of what you said.

I'm sorry, I have listened to many pieces but I didn't like none of them. It's all confused, full of loops, repetitions and predictable parts, I can't follow any melody. It seems like everything is improvised and mechanic.

Sometimes you start with a good idea but then the song takes an other direction.

Sound quality, mistakes and loop syncing do not help.

My advice is to listen to more music and work more on any single measure of your composition, until it will be "perfect" and write the piece after you have a clear idea of what to do.

You could also write shorter pieces and fill in with many ideas, they would be far more interesting.

Last advice: try to listen your pieces as an external listener, you will hear the truth. Sorry again, but keep trying. ;)

I agree completely, and here's my reason

1) where do you think this music will be played? Unsure

2) How many people can write music like this? I know I can

3) Is there a part of the music that defines you?Sso when people hear it they go "it's Sebastian!!"

4) Would audience listen to this more than 3 times? I can't. sorry