"Exotic Grandure"

This piece is on its way but i want to know if there is an over saturation of the trill like melody. Also there is a harp and piano part, im wondering if these should be taken out seeing as how they have no truly individual parts so far, or if they add to the feel of the piece and should stay.

Listenhttp://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/27/1119251/Exotic%20Grandure.mp3

Please comment :)

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I don't know about all that, but the bass line gets VERY VERY REPETATIVE AND ANNOYING very quickly. The piece as a whole just seems to be meandering about that one gesture, and that really needs to change.

Bass line does get old very fast. Something needs to change in here.

Thanks for the comments, I took in what you guys said and redid the Bass line through out the piece, the original still exists but with variation if that helps, its not just the same thing simply put into different places.

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