Adagietto & Scherzetto (string orc.)

Here is something i made up.

Please, let me know what do you think about it :)

score

http://www.box.net/shared/0h0d19sdlu

mp3

http://www.box.net/shared/hddq2i5dea

Tried t listen but got the message "Sorry, the free service is at full capacity"

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Tried t listen but got the message "Sorry, the free service is at full capacity"

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thanks for telling, i try that one.

e: look first post.

Ok, listened. I was intrigued by the use of harmony in the first movement. sometimes It loked like a 12 tone row, But the end was perfect tonal. I'm nt in to the 12tone 12tone thing. So I might be wrong. Can you explain?

Scherzo, one isue on the mp3. Letter D, ms 74. i noticed the gracenote on the viola are still pizzicato. Is that your intention?

Ok, listened. I was intrigued by the use of harmony in the first movement. sometimes It loked like a 12 tone row, But the end was perfect tonal. I'm nt in to the 12tone 12tone thing. So I might be wrong. Can you explain?

Scherzo, one isue on the mp3. Letter D, ms 74. i noticed the gracenote on the viola are still pizzicato. Is that your intention?

I'm somewhat interested about 12tone row, but this work dos not have anything to do with that. I'm more interested about shostakovich's tonal languange: sometimes it's tonal and occasionally atonal.

I think that gracenote is mistake, i fix that.

I arranged premiere for this work in next november, with our school symphony orchestra.

very interesting use of harmony there man. Sounds good, id say try to be a bit more spontaneous. Just to add interest. loved the abrupt pizzicato chords.

great dialogue between instruments. cool blend of consonance and dissonance- from bar 47-50 youve got what seems like a tone row interrupted by a strong major chord.niice.

just try to add a bit more variety id advise, it tends to get a bit...tiresome towards the end for want of a better word. well done though!

you know what would help this a lot? adding ritardando and accellarando to some of these phrases- because of the consistent rhythms it gets real monotonous.

it sounds a little like a 'sneaky' film score track. It works well, I like it a lot.

keep up the good work!

just try to add a bit more variety id advise

adding ritardando and accellarando to some of these phrases

Good advices, thanks.