August 8, 200916 yr Hi, I'm new and rookie... hope this will meritate your respective Ears..:blush: YouTube - Suggestion to NFS Shift: My BHP
August 8, 200916 yr Yes It does meritate my listening .... What is BHP ? ... hey is quite good, really exciting and cool, .... I always use to post what I would change in other people's pieces (is my kinda defect) ... but this time, .... no.... I wouldn't change anything .... OOoooo no, I think I will do it :D The very last part is unneeded, the great end a few second before is good enough ....
August 8, 200916 yr Author Yes It does meritate my listening ....What is BHP ? ... hey is quite good, really exciting and cool, .... I always use to post what I would change in other people's pieces (is my kinda defect) ... but this time, .... no.... I wouldn't change anything .... OOoooo no, I think I will do it :D The very last part is unneeded, the great end a few second before is good enough .... Thanks dude..:D I made this as a suggestion for "Need For Speed - Shift" soundtrack.:toothygrin: this explains the BHP thing (stands for Base HorsePower) And sorry for my bad english.
August 8, 200916 yr Your english is ok, english is not my native languane either .. ....just don't post things like "im here 4 u" instead "i'm here for you" and it really would end better if you remove that last seconds ...
August 8, 200916 yr Author Your english is ok, english is not my native languane either .. ....just don't post things like "im here 4 u" instead "i'm here for you" and it really would end better if you remove that last seconds ... It's my big problem... I start, I continue but I can't make a good end..:whistling:
August 8, 200916 yr a good end ? ... but you already made it .... just delete that last sounds, ... at 3.13 ends good, ... then after the bongos is completely unnecessary, delete from 3:14-3:21
August 8, 200916 yr Hey, cool track. I only have two minor suggestions for you to take or toss. The bass around 2:15, I think could repeat the tonic note for quarter durations instead of ending with the drums. This would keep the energy going. Also, toward the end there is a single hi-hat sound that is mixed with the same reverb as the snare and bass drum. I'd bring down the reverb wet mix on just that sound. This would place it in between the "clean" hats and the snare and bass drum. Just another level of mixing for you to consider. I'm impressed if this is early work. And it only took you a week? Geez, it takes me months to do a song. Enjoyed the listen. Best of luck to you with this.
