August 10, 200917 yr Help...Piano line needs a pianist touch. It's not finished yet. Still some monkeys to kick out and get in lline. Damn monkeys. Never wanna do what you tell 'em to. Don't listen with headphones on. There is a section that explodes. Mp3 MrBooBoo.mp3 - File Shared from Box.net - Free Online File Storage MrBooBoo.pdf
August 10, 200917 yr The piece is incomplete. And it needs to be cleaned up. On the top of every page one see [title] Anyhow, the piano is playable. The glissando in the bass can be played (the way you wrote it anyway). Glissando in OCTAVES in possible as well, but I don't think you intended that now did you? Piano writing seems good. Finish it! And Good Luck! :)
August 10, 200917 yr The piano part from 36 - 39 I would probably add some 'twinkle lullaby stuff' Certainly add an extra voice for both hands while the chords keep ringing, perhaps either an octave of the previous 16ths right hand piano part, with some counter point in the left, or something else. The part after the repeat, try writing some short piano solo, perhaps a dueling instruments part? or at least a conversation between the two instruments. I enjoyed the 'fireworks' part after the glissando. Overall, I enjoyed the piece. Let me know if you need more help :)
August 10, 200917 yr This is piece has a very playful aura to it, I enjoyed that. It made me want to dance around in my seat. The piece however, did become a little bit repetitive I felt...Other than that, and the fact that this isn't finished, great job! ^.^
